Oze beach

Posted on September 30, 2015 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to Oze beach

  1. campj says:
    September 30, 2015 at 11:26 am

    Great I love it keep on the good work.You used great verbs ,nouns keep it up joelly.

  2. doumi says:
    October 4, 2015 at 8:03 pm

    Good , but like Osman’s it’s very similar to the class writing

  3. garao says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:27 am

    Really good adverbs oze.

  4. bryak says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:27 am

    Great work Oze, you worked extremely hard!

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