kindom

Posted on September 30, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to kindom

  1. campj says:
    September 30, 2015 at 11:13 am

    It was a great setting of Kensuke’s Kingdom,you used great sentence openers and verbs carry on with the great work your doing.

  2. bryak says:
    September 30, 2015 at 11:26 am

    Great! this is amazing just like kensuke’s kingdom.

  3. doumi says:
    October 4, 2015 at 8:08 pm

    Really good,however your first sentence didn’t quite make sense.Keep up the good work

  4. hindd says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:22 am

    Good work you used amazing adjectives. But you could make it a bit longer with more information.

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