a beach peice

Posted on October 7, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to a beach peice

  1. Joelly says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:24 am

    Great work Aleix.You used verbs,adverbs.And great sentence openers.Keep it up

  2. doumi says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:28 am

    Great work!I love the wonky style writing!You included some good verbs and adjective.WONDERFUL

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