100 word challenge

Posted on October 5, 2015 by Deleted User
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1 Response to 100 word challenge

  1. jmoore says:
    October 14, 2015 at 8:07 pm

    I like the way you built suspense with huge footsteps and flashing light. Have a look again at your final sentence – it does not quite make sense.

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