the island of mysteries

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2 Responses to the island of mysteries

  1. guld says:

    It is really nice and long I like the way you use powerful words. It is really fantastic.

  2. Anonymous says:

    I like the way you used good adjectives in your writing and describing all of types of fish but next time don’t used that many explanation marks.Well done.

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