Stranded

Posted on September 30, 2015 by Deleted User
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5 Responses to Stranded

  1. amirk says:
    September 30, 2015 at 7:58 pm

    😀 FANTASTIC POWERFUL VERBS & ADJECTIVES!!!!!!

  2. amirk says:
    October 1, 2015 at 7:28 pm

    😀

  3. doumi says:
    October 4, 2015 at 7:54 pm

    Very good,
    but you need to check over your punctuation and if the sentence starters match the rest of the sentence

  4. Anonymous says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:04 am

    Really great!

  5. campj says:
    October 7, 2015 at 11:10 am

    Your title matched the events in your story well.Great job Kieran keep it up!

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