Great writing Mazin. You’ve used some great noun phrases and I really like the sentences where you have started with an adverb. It definitely is a nail biting story written in the style of the Michael Morpurgo. Kensuke’s Kingdom is one of my favourite books
Great writing Mazin. You’ve used some great noun phrases and I really like the sentences where you have started with an adverb. It definitely is a nail biting story written in the style of the Michael Morpurgo. Kensuke’s Kingdom is one of my favourite books